क्या करू के लिखे बिना रहा नही जाए
क्या करू के मेरा शेर किसीको समज्ह नही आए
खैर मना के तेरे दिल में तूफ़ान नही
क्या लिखूं की तू भी खुदको मेरी जगह पाए .
Tuesday, November 25, 2008
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Reaayat (रिआयत) means to indulge in yourself, to let go, to set yourself free. Here, this is how I do it. Comments / improvements and vocabulary inputs are welcome :)
3 comments:
ek number...
think about writing something in Marathi :)
this sher is due to shreyas's sisters inspiring grt (pJ) shers which he is listning from childhood!
good going bro! :)
nice thought
imho either
kisiko -> tujhe #line 2
or
kya likhu main -> kuch aisa likha nahi maine #line 4
would enhance it a bit more.
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